Evaluation of Childrens Film

Overall, I feel my Childrens Film was better than I first expected.
3 positives are:

• Sound with images, for example when to title came up it worked well with the soundtrack playing.
• Variety of shot distances, long shots, close ups, mid shots etc.
• Using varied shot transitions, as we used some before and after the title and with some credits.

Some negatives include.

• The editing may have not made the viewer realise immediately that 'Peter' was invisible.
• Using a vary of shot types, we could have used more shots and more varied.
• Holding a shot steady

Feedback from other group:

• Positives:
• Good choice of camera shot types
• well edited
• good choice of music

•  Negatives:
• Some shots badly positioned 
• Unsteady hand on same shots
• Dialogue quiet on some points   

 How we are going to achieve the improvements
To make our shots more steady we will use a tripod next time instead of holding the camera for a steady support.
To improve our editing we could have used techniques and effects on peter himself.