Thursday 10 March 2011

feedback from group T2-54

overall the opening sequence was good,  the way that they linked two different events was effective because it was good use of parallel footage.
something that could be improved is to have a wider variety of shots to fulfill the thriller conventions to create more atmosphere and make the opening sequence more understandable.
To help have a variety of shots is by having maybe a couple of close ups of the dead body in the middle of the road.

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